Oh oh oh, how about he be laying on grass or a stonework ground Eh, not trying to barge through the Critique Discouraged disclaimer, but you do seem like you want some ideas. Anyways, it's looking pretty good so far

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It's time to go with "Don't disturb." It's been "do not" for too long. We need to embrace the contraction. "Don't Disturb." "Do not" psyches you out. "'Do', alright! I get to disturb this guy! 'Not', Shit!... I need to read faster!"
— Mitch Hedberg

Nicely done - the arm hair looks good

Yea I seem to get the sense that he's laying on ground as well. Just as a note I had to full view it and look at it for a little bit to realize that the black shirt went on his tummy a little bit and that he wasn't morbidly skinny in the middle...it's prolly just me, but I thought I'd just tell ya anyway. Aaand the tip of his pink is pink (looks like the bg just seeping in). Besides those minor details I think it looks great! I really like the choice of black because, well, it just looks sexy and really fits the pose. And I reeeally like how you drew his right hand. You got the gesture perfectly. It's funny 'cause when I first saw it I was like, is that Matt?? (I'm sure he modelled the char after himself. The crotch fur's scary because of that O.o Anyhoo! I talk to much... *starts munching on a hip hop muffin*

Yup, that's background leackage on his tummy. It's okay, I've still got the .wbp file open so I can work out those little details. I see what you mean about his tummy, though. That bugged me for a bit when I looked at the picture zoomed out, but I guess I should specify that "fullview is a must" to see the detail. I dunno how to fit it, other than just erasing that part of his shirt. I might go back and do that. Whatevah. I'll figure it out. Thanks for the input, though! Always appreciated. <3

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...'cause you can't spell "slaughter" without "laughter".

Hhhhaaaaaaawwwwwtttttttt diiiiiicccckkkkiiiinnnngsssss!!!!!!!!

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My lips may be busy, but my face is TOTALLY up to the task of driving.

Hawt dickings? O_O

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...'cause you can't spell "slaughter" without "laughter".

Hot Dickings.


It does look like Matt! I like the solid black for the coat (although my moniter is very bright, so I can see you missed a spot near his hand, on the hem of his jacket). I like the shine on his cheek and nose, it's not overdone like some people do.

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"He shifted his weight and his trousers disappeared as if by magic!"

Pretty nice! Great colors and... he looks so... cute...

I say there should be sand. Looks like he's either laying on the beach or in some hella'long grass. The sunset colors really do work out for him.

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"All that you see or seem, is but a dream within a dream"
[Edgar Allan Poe]

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